She works hard from daybreak to nightfall. Some households treat her well, give her a cup of tea when she looks frail, others not so. She still wishes them each day for her bread is earned from them.
The children go to school because of her. The daughter is quite a good student and has dreams, the son is not too keen, a bit spoilt like in most households.
The children go to school because of her. The daughter is quite a good student and has dreams, the son is not too keen, a bit spoilt like in most households.
She walks home through the shanty town alleyways with a small bag of vegetables and a bottle of kerosene. Street fights, drunken brawls, cat calls and leering gazes greet her. She dreads to think that her daughter faces the same. Her little corner of the earth is visible now and her steps quicken.
The metal sheet that serves as a door is ajar. The fragrance of fresh garlands and incense greet her. Her son takes the bag and the bottle from her hand talking a dime to a dozen.
She looks towards the stove, her husband smiles. His legs paralysed after a factory accident, he is cooking their frugal meal. He gives her a glass of tea and a fresh jasmine string for her hair.
The evening sets into a multitude of stars.
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7 comments:
Beautiful! Loved the narration esp. of the second bit :-)
..touched me with such vivid descriptions!
So realistic that it feels like deja vu ....
Well done, once again
Sujata... I will miss your writings too... I will be back to read once I get some home things settled and maybe back to write but I really want to see a change in myself first ♡
This is lovely, Sujata. You have such a gift in your writing. Your descriptions are precise and the words you choose are so lyrical.
Helloooo .. come here after a long long time .. you are not writing that often ..
and once again heloooo .. remember me ? :)
enjoyed the read as always
Happy Diwali to you and family and Everyone around you .
Bikram's
Hey kept me hooked as always. Such a lucid narration. Happy Diwali! Were you on a break?
Hi Sujata,
Landed here from Leena's blog. Frankly speaking, the surname attracted me and, I wanted to pay a visit.
But, I'm now so glad I did decide to check the blog. Beautiful writing and especially loved this one :-)
Happy blogging, keep writing... :-)
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